I'm about halfway through the mobi edit of Mercury.  I just got done revising a major fight scene, and it sort of took it all out of me.  I feel like I've been fighting along with the hero.
I think that's good, though.  Hopefully the readers will feel the same way.  You want them to identify with the hero, right?  So wring them out along with him.
 
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