It's been several days since I've had a chance to work on Mercury. It's the season, you know. All sorts of Christmas-related stuff going on. Plus I've got other things to do. Anyway, the last time I wrote anything was Wednesday. I think.
So I opened the file today to get back into it. I scrolled to the bottom and skimmed the last paragraph to see where I left off. The first phrase that caught my eye was "They charged into the rape mob..."
It's really not as ridiculous as it sounds when read in context. At least, that's my hope. *fingers crossed*